EDIT: I feel quite stupid but I've almost fallen in the april fools. Really, during one second I was wondering if we played the same game... or if the alternative choice was an unespected update of the GOG version O_____o
I love the way you performed the ritual, especially de part where you speak about hypothetical Stormfist assault and reputation-scaling that's a tricky joke for the readers that never played the game! I'm impatient to see how you're going to manage the very end.
Seven months later... when I think Zandalor felt relieved Jenna was only two- or three-months pregnant!
One thing I wanted to do with my story is to surprise even those who've played the game, who know what really happens.
I haven't been working a lot on getting it onto that second site, blame Starcraft 2 for that. I also want to finish cleaning up the translated version of 'Tales from the Lost Kingdom' before that as well. Once it's up I'll post the new link in this thread.