Hmmm... Winterfox is right too...

I'm going to run back to 'Writer's Intent' here, I think <img src="/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smile.gif" alt="" />

Anyone who wishes to be a serious writer should be judged on that level; anyone who is just having a bit of fun should be judged a whole lot less harshly.

That sounds good to me <img src="/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smile.gif" alt="" />

I think I'm seeing the 'problem' here. This forum that Larian has set up is definitely a 'fun' site. Although I must confess that I take this particular thread in a serious vein. And since writing is my profession, I feel more compelled to lend any 'expertise' that I may have to anyone who truly wishes to improve their prose. If writing for 'fun' is the purpose of this thread, then my comments must seem very harsh and scientific. So, you're right where 'intent' comes into play, Elliot. I hadn't really considered it from that point of view until now.

Faralas <img src="/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/mage.gif" alt="" />