Faralas...
I read the entire thing from beginning to end, and it really wasn't pretty on any level. Three huge threads followed by a story that seemed to start half way through, run for half a chapter then jump to the middle of the next chapter with no explanations, and which also involved characters brought in from some kind of Manga/Anime thing that I (And obviously most of the people on the board) had never heard of.
A true experience, though not one I hope to repeat any time soon <img src="/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/biggrin.gif" alt="" />