<img src="/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/puppyeyes.gif" alt="" /> Oh, Gods..., That was one wasted hour of my life I'll be begging for on my deathbed.
Faralas <img src="/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/mage.gif" alt="" /> *who now remembers what it was like to be a teenager* Aack!
Sorry! I told you, you'd have to be morbidly curious to look, and fairly masochistic to continue reading. *sinister grin* I have no tolerance for angst-ridden teenagers, though, and when disasters of this kind happen, I have to physically refrain myself from giving the teen a slap to the head. (Sitting back and laughing is, on the whole, more productive.) But really, if you don't want criticism, you shouldn't ask for it.
Of course, there was a similar case where the author was not a teenager at all, but a twenty-something-years-old woman... but I'm sure you don't want to fry more of your braincells and neurons.