Good start, Glance <img src="/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smile.gif" alt="" /> A couple of words don't quite read right, but overall I'm liking it. Your main protagonist is unique and interesting, which is something I always look for <img src="/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smile.gif" alt="" />
As for a name... errr... I'll get back to you <img src="/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smile.gif" alt="" />
