Glance - I will definitely go back and read the prior entry as soon as time permits. That is why I wanted to make sure you knew that my opinion came from a "snapshot" in time. <img src="/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smile.gif" alt="" />
If, you are indeed, seeking for an unemotional encounter between your two characters then that is great and you have definitely succeeded. Again, let me go back and read your prior work and I will no doubt add my opinions again ( <img src="/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/winkwink.gif" alt="" /> can't help it <img src="/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/silly.gif" alt="" /> since I'm a girl <img src="/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/biggrin.gif" alt="" /> ).
Perhaps the transition from male to female might occur as he reaches for emotional maturity? (This is all very "tongue in cheek". I am definitely "picking" on the male readers here - not at all serious!!)