My first serious attempt at limited third person can be found
here.
If there are any rules to the form, I think I shredded them heartily, but it's supposed to be humour, and I shall plead total ignorance besides <img src="/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/biggrin.gif" alt="" />
The heroes are original characters.
Very original, some might say <img src="/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/biggrin.gif" alt="" />
All thoughts are welcome <img src="/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smile.gif" alt="" />