The post for fan fic was my attempt to illustrate how I'd like to see Minthara both visually and character personality. Sorry if it was long.
Next time I'll jist post a link to the fan fic and reference the chapter and title so if you want to read you can.
But the point was to get feedback on the descriptions of the armor, her appearance, her personality, etc.
And no worries. I took no offense.
Ok. Thanks for understanding and explaining. You know in such a case maybe next time don't use the link, but quote the fanfic under spoiler with some elaboration and bold formatting on important parts? So impatient people like me can browse fast through it and get the idea. So far I'm agreeing that Minthara would win from more eerie depiction.
You know, that makes a lot of sense. I'm a writer, so it is always easiest for me to write out descriptive scenes and such to illustrate what I'm thinking, but I get why people might not like it. It's a scrolling nightmare.
